Found this interesting article on i09 regarding the new Disney movie Zootopia and how only a year before he movie’s release the writers realized they need to make a “simple” but very big change to the story to make it work:

How Disney Fixed a Huge Mistake with Zootopia Just One Year Before Its Release

The upshot of the article (my apologies for giving up the crux of the story but I’ve tried to be vague about who the changes relate to and, besides, you should read the article anyway!) is that originally the movie’s focus was on one character and, about a year before the movie’s release, the creators/writers realized the movie worked far better if another character was the central character/protagonist of the piece.

As the article put it,

>>In retrospect, the (story) flip may seem like the most simple thing ever.<<

Take it from me, changing the focus of a story is not a “simple” thing at all!

Though the story received a virtual flood of comments (there are over 700 to date), I nonetheless put in my two cents and, though my comment hasn’t been “approved” yet (nor I doubt will be…articles like these are essentially forgotten after a few days), I was nonetheless tickled someone read and liked it enough to star it.  Here is my comment in all its glory…and it features just a little bit of information regarding my latest Corrosive Knights novel as well as comments I’ve made already regarding Mad Max: Fury Road:

Take it from me, when writing, things which “seem” so simple often are not…even if in retrospect the “solution” to your problem quite literally is right in front of you.

I’ve written enough to realize one needs to constantly monitor whatever work one is involved in and equally constantly keep thinking of alternate scenarios. For example, in my latest work, going into the story I had a character pegged as the villain of the piece and for months I wrote the character as such. Suddenly, and after many, many, MANY hours of work I realized the character worked better as an unwitting, though courageous, soul who fought the villainy in the story. I reworked my story (and am in the process of finishing it up) but felt this change worked for the better.

Another example of a story that might have worked better with a “simple” change involves Mad Max: Fury Road. While I think the film as is is damn good, I can’t help but also feel it would have been better had director/co-writer George Miller cut the character of Max entirely from it. Now, before you label me as some kind of nut, understand that I’m a HUGE fan of Mad Max 2 aka The Road Warrior. In fact, I would say that movie is my all time favorite action film ever and I love the character of Max.

However, I believe Mr. Miller and company obviously started writing Fury Road with the idea of making a new Mad Max film but in the writing process grew more and more interested in the Furiosa character and her story. Because they were invested in making a “Mad Max” film, they kept the Max character around even when, in my opinion, the story no longer needed him and, worse yet, took away from the focus of the story, which was the character of Furiosa and her journey to redemption.

Your mileage, as they say, may vary.

For those interested in the mechanics of writing, this is indeed a “teaching” type moment.  As a writer, you can -and often do!- get a form of creative “tunnel vision”.  You may start a story thinking you’re going to accomplish A, B, C, and D but wind up mixing up the order and adding many new elements and coming out with C, A, X, and Y.

In some ways this may explain the notion/statement from some authors the characters “spoke” to them and maybe they, as writers, “followed” them rather than creatively writing.

The notion that a story or character takes over from you, the writer, is bullshit, by the way.

As a writer, YOU come up with the scenarios and YOU make the subsequent changes.  YOU are the one that realizes things work or don’t and YOU are the one that ultimately decides to move in other directions when you see they work better than the direction you may have originally considered.

As time passes I stand more and more firmly behind my statement regarding Mad Max: Fury Road.  I strongly suspect Mr. Miller and Company started writing the movie as a “Mad Max” film but somewhere along the line they grew to love the character of Furiosa to the extent that she became the movie’s central character.  In a perfect world, I suspect Mr. Miller and company would have cut Max out of that film entirely and made an original “Apocalyptic” Mad Max-type film with Furiosa as the one and only lead character.

However, because we are talking about making an expensive studio movie and you need financial backing, its easier to ask for and receive backing if you come in saying this will be a “Mad Max” film rather than a “Apocalyptic Mad Max-type film featuring a new lead female character” and therefore they kept the Max character in the film even though his presence was unnecessary.

As for my own work mentioned above, I did indeed start my latest Corrosive Knights novel with the intention of a certain character being the primary villain but realized, over time, he made more sense as a sympathetic character who is forced to work and witness the evil around him first hand.

A simple change…that required “fixing,” ie changing completely, many, many hours and days and weeks worth of work!