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Corrosive Knights, a 5/16/18 update

It’s been nearly a month since my last update (4/18/18… you can read it here) on progress for Book #7 of the Corrosive Knights series.

Today, I’m pleased to announce I’ve finished the read-through/written revisions of Draft #6 of the book and will be soon putting those revisions on the computer.  Once done, It’s off to Draft #7.

It’s taken me a little longer than I hoped to get through the read-through, though this was something that was also anticipated.  We had some traveling done (a graduation) and I’ve been left in almost sole charge of a family business so time to focus on the novel has been a little tighter (and might be a little tighter for the next few weeks) than before.

Regardless, I feel I have a very good grasp -much better than I did after finishing Draft #5- of the book than before.

Basically, the first half or so of the book is great.  It requires minimal fixing, mostly grammatical/spelling type stuff.

However, there is still work to be done in the second half of the book, some of which may require a little more writing (I suppose this is similar to when it is reported a film calls back the actors to do “reshoots”).

To be clear: The book is well on its way to being finished but there are elements in that second half that will require more work.

On the great side, I feel that after I finish up the revisions for the 1st half of the book, I can set that aside and don’t have to do full novel revisions from now on.

This will save time as I’ll be focused on shaping/revising the second half of the book exclusively and reading/revising a full novel versus one half a novel will cut down on the time required to finish up.

Before I release the book and when I’m happy with the second half of it, I’ll give it one more full read-through and see how the book feels as a whole.

As impatient as I am to get it all done, these things do take their time, but it IS moving ahead and we will get there.

Soon!

Game of Thrones… 2018 edition

I haven’t watched a single episode of the Game of Thrones TV series, though I have little doubt it is as good as the shows millions of fans claim.  Neither have I read a single one of George R. R. Martin’s books (formally called A Song of Ice and Fire) upon which the TV show was based but, again, I’m quite certain they are as good as the fans similarly claim (and many of them say the books are far better than the TV show).

Having said this, and being a cultural/book nerd, despite the fact that I’ve neither seen nor read any of the Game of Thrones stuff I’ve followed the ins and outs of the show and the delayed release of the final two books of the series.

If you’ve been living in a cave these past ten years or so:  George R. R. Martin’s A Song of Ice and Fire books -of which there are currently five released, are supposed to have two more before concluding.

The first book, A Game of Thrones, was released in 1996.  Book two, A Clash of Kings, was released in 1998.  Book three, A Storm of Swords, was released in 2000.  Book four, A Feast of Crows, was released in 2005.  The last released book (to date) is A Dance With Dragons, was released in 2011.

As you can see, the first three books were released two years apart each.  With book four, it took Mr. Martin 5 years.  With book five, 6 years.

If you’re keeping track of time here, 7 years have passed since the release of book 5 and, according to James Whitbrook over at i09.com, you shouldn’t expect book 6’s release this year:

Please try to be surprised: George R. R. Martin’s The Winds of Winter is definitely not coming in 2018

So here’s the thing: The TV show has already gone farther along in the story than Mr. Martin has with his books.  The show will, unless Mr. Martin is hiding the proverbial rabbit in his hat, conclude well before the final book (or perhaps the final two!) are released.

And there are those who wonder if the two last books will ever be released.

Here’s the thing (and I don’t mean to be grim here): Mr. Martin is currently 69 years old.  That’s not ancient, by any means, but if we are to assume that Book 6 gets released, say, next year, that means it will have taken him 8 years to release it and, by that time, Mr. Martin will be in/around 70 years of age.

Again, this is assuming the book, which has been delayed quite a bit, will indeed be released next year.  If it isn’t, well, add another year to the author’s age.

Now, if it takes him another 8 years to finish the last book (and that’s an optimistic estimate, considering each subsequent book has taken progressively longer to get done), Mr. Martin will be 78 years old when this book is released.

While it is certainly possible Mr. Martin will live to that age, one begins (again, getting grim here), to worry about his longevity and, subsequently, the possibility the series will get finished, at least in book form.

Though I haven’t read any of the books, as an author currently working on the conclusion to my own series, I’m intrigued -and I hope, if only for the series’ many fans!- to see if Mr. Martin gets the work done.

Corrosive Knights, a 4/18/18 update

Whew…

It’s been twenty days since my last Corrosive Knights update of 3/28/18, and I’m very, VERY pleased to announce I’ve just now finished the rewrites of draft #5 of the latest book in the series, Book #7…

In this new draft, I’ve cut quite a bit of stuff and taken the book from 288 pages (single spaced) down to 246.  A lot of the stuff that was cut out was either alternate “takes” of scenes or stuff I put in the back of certain chapters and wondered if this stuff would be needed and/or could be used in any new draft.  The answer, to many of those bits and pieces, was a “no”.

So the book is far more streamlined and that much closer to having everything in its proper place.

Note too, that it took me much less time to get through this than getting draft #4 done, which took something like 3-4 months.

That’s what happens as the book nears completion, things are more likely to fall in place and less “creative” writing is necessary while more grammatical/spelling type things rise to the forefront.

Regardless, as of today draft #5 is history and its off to draft #6.

I can’t wait for you all to see it!

1923 Copyrighted works entering into public domain…

…in 2019!

The article, by Nick Douglas and which is found over on lifehacker.com, offers a…

List of 1923 Copyrighted Works that enter into public domain in 2019

These include songs, books, movies, and even works of art.  It’s an intriguing list and it does bring up, at least for me, the issue of copyright in general.

As an author, I feel copyright is a very important tool to protect one’s works (duh) from being appropriated by others.  I would certainly go ballistic if someone comes up, without my authorization, stories set in my Corrosive Knights universe and subsequently released them.  If it’s “fan fiction” and posted where anyone/everyone can read them, I don’t mind.

But if a conscious attempt has been made to create something for sale/profit, then that crosses a line.  I created the Corrosive Knights “universe” and the characters that inhabit them.  I feel I should have the ultimate say, as long as I live, to what becomes of them.

However, issues regarding copyright aren’t always so clear cut.

Years ago and way, waaaaay back in the 1980’s I was an early fan of the brilliant writing of Alan Moore.  For those who don’t know who he is, Alan Moore is considered, even today, one of the best comic book writers there ever was.  Among the works he wrote, several made it to film:  V for Vendetta, Watchmen, League of Extraordinary Gentlemen, From Hell.

Most of his very best works appeared in DC Comics, including Watchmen, Swamp Thing, and V for Vendetta.  In the case of V for Vendetta, the initial stories were serialized in a British comic book magazine called Warrior but after the magazine folded it appeared the work, which hadn’t reached its conclusion, would never be finished.  DC Comics picked it up and Mr. Moore, along with original artist David Lloyd, were able to finish the series and get the full story released through DC.

Mr. Moore had a big falling out with DC Comics in the late 1980’s and left the company, never to return again.  According to interviews, the main issue Mr. Moore had with DC was regarding the rights to Watchmen, which according to the contract he signed with DC would revert to him once the book was no longer in print.

Thing is, Watchmen was so very successful DC’s been able to keep it in print since it was originally published and therefore have retained the rights to the work.  Mr. Moore, who signed that contract in an era when reprinting works in near perpetuity seemed unlikely, feels he was shafted and DC has taken advantage of him.

Did they?

I suppose.

DC must have seen at least the possibility of retaining the work to include that provision in the contract, though one could also argue that maybe Mr. Moore, who was a red hot creator by that point, should have read the contract more carefully before signing it (or at least had a lawyer read it and advise him on the provisions).

However, just how “original” is Watchmen?

As a story, it is quite original, though I very much believe Alan Moore took -whether deliberately or unconsciously- the ending of the Outer Limits episode The Architects of Fear… or some other similar work  (You can read more about that here).  My feeling, at least based on interviews with the recently deceased Len Wein, who was the editor of Watchmen, suggest that at the very least Mr. Wein knew the ending was going in that direction and told Mr. Moore to watch out.  Mr. Wein stated in these interviews that Moore didn’t really care.

Regardless of who/what the ending of Watchmen was taken from (or not!), what is not in dispute is the chain of events that led to Watchmen being made, which bends the issue of copyright to a near breaking point.

Back in the 1980’s DC Comics bought the defunct Charlton Comics line of superheroes.  The characters, with a few exceptions, were for the most part forgotten.  But Alan Moore was given the opportunity to write a story for these newly acquired characters.  Thing is, the story he came up with would have effectively “ended” any future Charlton heroes story, something DC wasn’t about to do, having invested good money in buying the rights to the characters.

So Mr. Moore modified the story and “created” new characters to inhabit it and, voila!, Watchmen was created.  Here’s a visual comparison of the Charlton Comics heroes and their eventual Watchmen “twins” (click on the image to see it larger):

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Here’s where the proverbial rubber hits the road: I feel sympathy for Mr. Moore.  Of all the comic book works he’s done in his life, Watchmen was his most ambitious, at least IMHO.  He clearly poured his heart into the story and, even if the ending may be suspect, nonetheless wrote an intricate work that deserves to stand the test of time.

Yet it probably never would have come to be had DC not acquired the Charlton Comics heroes and asked him to come up with a story involving them (he might, to be fair, have come up with a story similar to Watchmen eventually, on his own).  Further, the characters he “created” for Watchmen were clearly meant to be thinly veiled versions of the Charlton Comics heroes.

Issues of ownership, thus, get stretched in a matter like this.

Curiously, though Mr. Moore’s arguments with DC involve the Watchmen ownership, he hasn’t been shy about using actual characters who have fallen into public domain.  Indeed, The League of Extraordinary Gentlemen was composed of a host of public domain characters!

Would the creators of those characters, were they alive today, be miffed about what Alan Moore has done with them?  Would they be angry that someone has appropriated their works/characters and profited from their use?

An interesting question which will never have a proper answer.

Will Davies, Harlequin Romance cover artist

This article, from CBC news, is about artist Will Davies…

He designed over 500 Harlequin romance covers – Now there’s a Canada Post stamp in his honor

Must admit, I wasn’t all that familiar with Mr. Davies’ work.  Here’s the piece being used for the stamp:

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A closer view of the actual image:

Nice.

I looked up other works by Mr. Davies.  Here are some neat ones I found:

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Nice stuff, though clearly meant for the romance book market.  He did other stuff, too.  Like this piece for Ford…

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For Chevrolet…

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And he did some fascinating pen and ink works, as well…

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Fascinating stuff.  Until yesterday, I hadn’t heard of Mr. Davies.  Now I’m incredibly intrigued by his artwork!

Corrosive Knights, a 3/29/18 update

Been a while since my last update (which was posted just a little over a month ago, on 2/27/18) on my latest novel, #7, in the Corrosive Knights series.

As I mentioned before and as is pointed out in the graphic above, Book #7 in this series presents a conclusion to the main story line, though there will be a Book #8 (I’ve already written the full first draft of it) that presents an Epilogue to the story.

So a month ago I wrote how I was done with the 4th draft of this novel.  It was a big event, given that with this completed draft I had most of the elements of the story in place and felt that future drafts would tilt more and more toward grammatical/stylistic/spelling revision rather than adding new story elements.

Welp, in the month that followed I finished reading this latest draft and adding a cornucopia of notes, revisions, and deletions.  There will be some stuff I need to work on harder than others.  Toward the middle of the book there is a part that needs work and likely some new passages/pages.  Similarly, the book’s climax and conclusion also needs more work.

However, the rest of the book proved essentially what I thought: Needing work on a grammatical/spelling/presentation level.  This includes, obviously, making passages clearer and more precise, perhaps eliminating some repetition.  Streamlining and making sure the reader will have a smooth, clear work to follow.

As opposed to the 4th draft, it took me, despite plenty of other things robbing me of time, three weeks or so to re-read and provide written notes on the work, compared to taking something like 2-3 months to read through and make notes on the 3rd draft!

As of a few days ago, I’m hard at work on the computer putting all those notations into the new draft.  Once again and in comparison to the previous draft, this is so far moving quite smoothly.  In two days I worked through 41 pages of the 288 and hope to keep a similar pace up to the end.  Of course, things will slow down when I get to that middle section and climax, as these will require more work.

Regardless, things are so far moving very smoothly and I feel like this novel, at this stage, is farther along -and therefore closer to being “done”- than were all my other books at a similar point in time.

I’ve noted before that for most of my novels it takes something like 12 (!) drafts to feel a book is indeed “finished”.  Considering how far along I feel this book is at this point in time, I suspect it won’t take me quite that many drafts before declaring the book done.

Anyway, back to work!

Corrosive Knights, a 2/27/18 update

This is one hell of an exciting day.

After far too long, I’ve finally, FINALLY finished up the fourth draft of Book #7 in the Corrosive Knights series.

This is a very big thing and a huge step forward.

The first three drafts of the book were far from complete, missing as they were a lot of elements which I was putting in with each subsequent draft.

With Draft #4, I had almost everything put down and almost everything that was left, I hoped, I’d be putting in this draft.  While there still remain a few missing elements, they’re minor compared to the big chunks of material added in this draft.

What does this all mean?

I’ve mentioned this before, that there are several stages to writing a book, at least for me.  First I have a concept and, often times, I have a strong beginning and end envisioned and I have to then work out the middle sections, connecting everything together in a way that makes sense and, hopefully, is original and entertaining.

In the case of Book #7, there was the added work involved in wrapping up all the various plot threads into this conclusion.

At certain points I feared the book would prove too long and that I’d have to break it in two.  I realized, much to my relief, that I could finish the book without breaking it apart.  Nonetheless, the book now runs to 147,148 words over 288 single spaced pages.  This is easily the longest of any of my novels, which often ran around 110,000 words, give or take.

So, what’s next?

I’ll print this behemoth out and its on to draft #5.  Here’s the thing: I’m now moving from creating new scenarios and scenes and going into revision.  At this stage, I’ll be looking into the writing itself and making sure the grammar/spelling is good.  I’ll also be streamlining any things that need to be streamlined while expanding whatever requires it.

The beauty of this is drafts will be completed far more quickly now that I won’t be as focused on creation of new material.

The big question: When will the book be ready?

While its impossible to offer a solid release date, suffice it to say today’s completion of Draft #4 brings me a HUGE step closer to getting the whole thing done.  I’ve long felt this book could be ready later this year and, so far, there’s no reason to change that (admittedly vague) prediction.

Regardless, I’m moving along so for those who are waiting, have just a little more patience… Book #7 will be here before you know it!

Corrosive Knights, a 2/12/18 update

Incredibly, its been one day over a month since my last update on book #7 of the Corrosive Knights series.

While I wish I could say I’m done with the latest draft, I’m not quite there yet.

However, I’m offering this update because last week I made it through almost everything and have only the conclusion of the book to revise before heading into the next draft.

Seems like not much of an update, no?

Actually, it is a big deal.

I don’t want to get into details as they would be nothing more than SPOILERS for a novel that I haven’t even hinted at what occurs in it, but before the conclusion there was a scene that I’d been thinking and worrying about for a very long time as to how effective it is.

I wrote the first draft of that scene a while back, did some minor revision, but now, as I’m on my current revision, I’m doing a top to bottom look and trying my best to make this one of the last drafts I do to focus on the plot and make sure all story elements are in place.  My hope is that when I’m done with the current draft, I’ll move from actual writing to mostly revision of grammatical/spelling issues rather than deal with the story proper… not an easy thing to do with all the plot threads I’m dealing with while hoping to conclude what is the finale of a seven book series that spans tens of thousands of years.

In this book, this one sequence is a linchpin, a point that required considerable buildup and, once presented, needed to have a maximum impact.

As it turned out, there was a character I created for this book in the early going that slowly, with each new iteration/revision, was relegated to erasure.  Though I had forgotten, this individual had, as it turned out, one final fairly big scene before the even bigger scene I was all worried about getting right and I completely forgot it was there.

At least until I arrived at that point in my revision.

That poor character’s scene, like the others, was destined to be removed but I realized much of the dialogue worked… just not with that character.  There was another character in the novel I wanted to expand on and suddenly all things fell beautifully into place.  I removed the character that I created for the book, inserted the one I wanted to have a bigger role, did some minor dialogue modifications, and… VOILA!… the scene worked, beautifully, and was an excellent primer/intro to the following, big scene that I needed to have work.

The “new” intro scene with the different character, as it turned out, did everything I needed to get us to that pivotal scene that followed and one strengthened the other.

Even better, the pivotal scene played out beautifully and I found myself not needing to do too terribly much in terms of revising it.

I know, I know, I’m being very cryptic here and anyone reading this has no freaking idea how important and exciting these two scenes worked for me.

Understand: Writing a book, as I’ve stated many times before, is work.

Hard work.

Over a long period of time (in my case a book takes between 1-2 years to complete) you incrementally create your story while revising and reworking scenes, sometimes re-arranging them like a weird jigsaw puzzle, until you take all those words and chapters and turn them into something that flows and, if you’ve done your work well, the result is something that really works.

Triumphs, at least for me, are often found in small things: A great phrase here, a great description there, a clever callback, a clever metaphor.  It isn’t until you’ve finished the final draft and are happy with what you’ve done that you finally feel a great sense of accomplishment and, hopefully, success.

It isn’t often when a sequence that’s been worrying you for a very long time seems to work almost like magic.  It’s even rarer that you realize with not too many changes two scenes work together to create this magic, and its especially delirious to feel this toward the conclusion of your book, when you want audiences to feel that same emotion.

That beautiful, wonderful feeling took me through Friday and gave me hope that what was left in the book’s conclusion would run fairly smoothly.

Today, that beautiful excitement is gone as I buckle down and revise the book’s end.

…then its on to the next draft! 😉

Billy Joel and… H. P. Lovecraft..?!?

Hilarious (to me anyway, your mileage may vary!) article found on i09.com and written by Beth Elderkin regarding the fascinating fact that…

Billy Joel and H. P. Lovecraft “Sing Us A Song” for Cthulu

From the article, its very first line:

Turns out, it’s surprisingly easy to take Billy Joel’s song “Piano Man” and turn it into an ode to the Elder Gods long gone.

To wit, people have realized that H. P. Lovecraft’s 1917 poem Nemesis syncs up quite well with Piano Man.

There are three videos embedded in the article.  I liked this one quite a bit (though that Billy Joel picture is pretty damn creepy! 😉 ):

Corrosive Knights, a 1/11/18 update

We’re into the new year and I fully expect to have the latest book in the Corrosive Knights series, book #7, be released…

As you can see from the above, Book #7 is the conclusion to the series.  By that I mean the main story I’ve been working on for 6 books comes to its end with Book #7.

This book looks like it will be my longest, wordcount-wise, to date and I’m currently 2/3rds of the way through the latest draft.  This draft, I’m hoping, will be the one where I get all the main details down and from that point on future drafts will hopefully involve cleaning up/streamlining the story for maximum effect.

As you can also see from the graphic above, following this book there will be a Book #8, which I call an “Epilogue”.  This book will come out very soon after Book #7’s release.

Very soon after.

Why?

Those who have been around here for a while know why.  It’s because I already have Book #8 written out, at least the first full draft, and what’s left to do is review it, clean up/streamline it, and it’ll be ready.  I don’t anticipate that taking much more than a few months.

Will both books be released in 2018?

I can’t promise that as it depends entirely on the work I have to do with Book #7.  The quicker I get that book out, the quicker I get to #8.

We’ll see…