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Sketchin’ 27… and a Corrosive Knights update 9/22/2017

Life for me is slowly but surely going back to “normal” after Irma.

The electricity returned a while back and we’ve picked up all the fallen branches and some has been picked up by the (very) busy garbage people and I think I’ve managed to regain all the lost sleep and shake off the muscle aches from all the stuff I’ve been doing to get the house back to what it was.

I’ve also managed to get back to both my writing and artwork.

First, regarding the writing, in the past few days I’ve been on a tear with the latest Corrosive Knights novel, getting the bits I needed written out and working them to something satisfactory.  Incredibly, because of Irma I hadn’t written a single thing for this novel in nearly two weeks.

Ugh.

But its flowing well.  Last time around when I talked about this book, I mentioned that it might be split into two books.  This will be the concluding chapter of the Corrosive Knights series and, as such, I was intent on making it as spectacular as I could… but I worried there might be a little too much diverse material for “just” one book.

Well, based on the writings I’ve done in the past few days, I’m thinking that might not be necessary after all and I may well be able to make this concluding chapter “fit” well within this novel after all, even if this concluding chapter will be extra sized.

This thrills me!

Anyway, I’ll offer more information as it comes…

Meanwhile, my latest sketch.  This piece, taken from perhaps one of the most famous frames from the 1920 silent film The Cabinet of Dr. Caligari, shows Dr. Caligari, his sleepwalking/zombie subject Cesare, and Jane Olsen, the intrepid lady in peril.

If you haven’t seen the film, give it a whirl.  For something now nearly 100 years old, The Cabinet of Dr. Caligari is an incredible work well worth checking out.

Corrosive Knights, a 8/30/17 update

Before I get to the update, a story presented on theguardian.com and written by Stephanie Convery:

Terry Pratchett’s unfinished novels destroyed by a steamroller

The article’s title is self-explanatory.  The late author/humorist Terry Pratchett, who died in 2015, wanted his unfinished works steamrolled so they took what one has to assume were the hard drives of his computer and did just that.

A shame, I must say.

While much of my “bits and pieces” are pretty crappy and not worth printing, on the other hand they are bits and pieces I’ve worked on and given some of my time to.  Maybe one day people will be curious to see all my stuff and, in that case, I’m not adverse to having it available to be seen… though I doubt at this time you’ll find a large amount worthy of “discovery”.

Which is a good segue to my Corrosive Knights series and the progress I’m making on book #7, the latest in the series.

With regard to that, there’s the proverbial good news, bad news, and good news here…

I’ve mentioned before Book #7 was intended to conclude the series’ main story, though I’ve been hasty to add that there was going to be a book #8 which would present an “epilogue”.

Well, things might be changing.

Without getting into any spoilers, Book #7 was always intended to present a “two part” story which dovetails in the end before reaching the conclusion.

So, the first bit of Good News: Instead of concluding the main story with Book #7, I’m now thinking it might be better to present the two stories separately, ie have a Book #7a and a Book #7b.  Or, to be less anal about these things, have a book #7, follow it up with Book #8 -no longer the epilogue story I was planning-, and end it all with that epilogue story as Book #9.

In other words, the Corrosive Knights series, to all those fans out there of the books, may wind up being one book longer than I intended.

The Bad News is that if I go this way, it means there’s a lot of work for me to do on what might be the “new” Book #8.  It will no longer be part of a book and, being its own full novel I feel it has to be “novel length” which means it clocks in at the 100,000 word area.

Which puts me in a bit of a quandary.  The first part of the story is essentially written up (It already reached the 100,000+ range).  It needs considerable editing/cleaning, for sure, but I was holding off on doing this and instead focused on the second part of the novel’s story.

Now, if I decide to let that second part be used in its own novel, it means I could jump back to that first part of the story and finish it up and get it released relatively quickly.

However…

Here’s the thing, I’m in something of a “groove” with this second part of the story and I’m loathe to switch gears and move away from what I’m currently doing.

Let me be crystal clear here: I’m dying to get the book out but writing is a difficult thing for me.  Mostly its because I’m very, very hard on myself.  I don’t want to create something that is at best average and/or predictable.  I pride myself on releasing stories that, I hope, surprise and engage readers.

To do that, I get into this OCD-like state where I’m thinking about the work I’m currently doing during almost all my waking moments.

I know this sounds like exaggeration, but I assure you this is the case.

For me new, interesting ideas can suddenly pop up.  I could be walking the dog or driving to get some crappy fast food or sitting on the toilet or taking a shower and, just like that, it hits me.  Most other times I’m thinking about where I’m currently at and how to write the latest chapter.  Either that or rewrite it and make it as good as I can get it.

The bottom line is this:

If I have enough material to make a second novel out of that second story (something which is still not a done deal), it means the concluding two books of this series will take a little longer to be released than I was hoping.

My hope was to release this last book by late this year or early next year but, if we do have two final books, I have a lot of work to do and that will take me through the end of the year.

At least.

And then, I have to get into the rewrites/editing and that will take longer.

Which brings us to the last of the Good News: If I do decide to split this book in two and finish that second book before going into the editing of the first, the last three books of the series are going to come out really quickly.

I’ve already written out what would be the first book.  I’m currently writing that second book.  I have the first draft of the epilogue book already written.

All I may need to do once I finish that second story is edit the three last books which means they will be released pretty quickly.  Writing a book is always far harder and more time consuming than editing it.

However, all this is in flux.

Let’s see how the second half of that story goes and I’ll update you soon enough.

In the meantime, stay dry and enjoy the last of the summer.

Corrosive Knights, a 8/7/17 update

I’m seeing the proverbial light at the end of the tunnel.

Don’t misunderstand me: I’m not yet close to finishing book #7 in the Corrosive Knights series.  In fact, there are still several months of work to be done and my hope is that it will be completed and released by later this year or, if worse comes to worse, the beginnings of next year.

No, the light at the end of the tunnel I’m referring to is the end of summer.

How I long for it to finally end!

I love my daughters but, both being in college means working on the places they live in.  The last week we headed out to where my younger daughter is going to College and went in two cars filled to the brim with her stuff (not to brag, but when I was a young ‘un, all I needed fit into a suitcase!).

We unloaded the material, had a one day mini-vacation, then spent a full wasted day waiting for an IKEA delivery that never showed up.  The next day, our last in those northern lands, forced us to rent a van and haul hundreds of pounds worth of to-be-put-together furniture from the warehouse that was supposed to deliver it to us (they screwed up, plain and simply, and couldn’t deliver on our last day there), then take said furniture up a flight of stairs (no elevator at my daughter’s apartment), and put it all together in time to then drive the five hours back home where I needed to be because by the next morning at the bright and early hour of 6 A.M. I needed to take my wife in for a medical exam.  To those worried, don’t be… it was a routine exam and everything was perfect.

The past week is an encapsulation of the summer in general, where I feel I’ve made progress on my writing but am seemingly always being pushed into other endeavors.

As someone who prides himself on writing a certain amount each day, its frustrating as hell but, on the positive side, its sometimes good to “step back” from what you’re working on, give your brain a chance to not think about what you’ve been writing, to then return to it later and find yourself far more “fresh” and energized.

I’m hoping that’ll be the case.

School starts for them both in the next couple of weeks and then, until Thanksgiving and unless something else happens, it’ll be just me and the computer.

There’s not a whole heck of a lot more writing to be done before I can start revising the book in earnest and I’m just dying to get there.  Corrosive Knights Book #7 is the conclusion to the Corrosive Knights Saga and I want to make sure I’ll give everyone out there their money’s worth.

And as I said before, just because the story ends there doesn’t mean there won’t be at least one more book set in that universe.  Indeed, I’ve already got Book #8 of the series written (at least a full first draft) and it will serve as an “epilogue” to the series and, best of all, because I’ve already written such a fully formed first draft, it will be out very soon after #7 is released.

That much I guarantee you!

The Woman in Cabin 10 (2016) a novel review

In today’s book market, there is a demand for mystery novels with titles -it seems!- that have the word “Girl” or “Woman” in them.  These novels also seem to involve characters who aren’t always reliable narrators and plots which delve into these mysteries from a decided female angle.

I spotted a copy of The Woman in Cabin 10, written by Ruth Ware, in Costco one day and, after reading the brief description on the back cover, was intrigued enough to give it a try.

Mind you, the plot of the novel, involving a reporter who gets to travel on the premiere trip of a luxury -but relatively small- cruise ship and meets a woman who then apparently vanishes from the trip, sounded curiously similar to the plot of director Alfred Hitchcock’s first really big successful film, 1938’s The Lady Vanishes.

Look, I’m not going to mince words here: The Lady Vanishes is a far better overall work and, if you know of the film and/or have fond feelings for it, you may find Ms. Ware’s book not only a rather bold appropriation/modernization of that story but, also, a rather weaker one at that.

Which isn’t to say the book is a flop.

Far from it.

The Lady In Cabin 10 (let’s abbreviate it to LC10 from here on, ok?), involved a main character who is very much like some of the “unreliable” narrators in the books I mentioned above.  She’s something of a flake, not certain where she’s going with her life and winds up with the reporting job only because her superior, who would have gone, is pregnant and unable to.

When we first meet her, she’s also been the victim of a home invasion/burglary and because of that trauma -and too much liquor- is also suffering from lack of sleep.

When she boards the ship and meets the lady in Cabin 10, it is purely by coincidence and, when she thinks the woman was killed, she finds that no one on the ship knows of her and, further, Cabin 10’s designated occupants never showed for the trip and therefore the cabin was supposedly empty.  The ship’s passengers, including an ex-lover, suspect she may be losing her mind, but she persists and, eventually, solves the mystery.

Again, The Lady Vanishes features essentially the same plot.  In that movie, a woman on a train trip meets another, elderly woman who subsequently vanishes.  Our heroine (who isn’t unreliable as far as that goes) finds no one knows of the missing woman and some aboard the train begin to question her sanity.  She persists and, eventually, solves the mystery.

LC10 is, alas, not a great book but I did enjoy Ms. Ware’s writing style and was curious to see where it was all going.  You could certainly do much worse than spend some time reading this particular book.

Having said that, you’d probably have a better time simply catching the Alfred Hitchcock film.

Vintage scifi available for download!

And its free!

Galaxy Magazine, which hit news stands from 1950 to 1980, is now available for free (and legal!) download over here:

https://archive.org/details/galaxymagazine

There are plenty of fascinating stories to be found in the various issues of the magazine and, credit where its due, I found out about the availability of these issues via the below story, written by Matt Novak and found on gizmodo.com:

Vintage Scifi Mag Galaxy Available For Free Online

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Corrosive Knights doodles and updates…

Was in an artistic mood and came up with…

If you’ve read my Corrosive Knights novels, you should have an idea what this is all about.

Not intended to be a cover or anything specific, just a quick artistic representation of something found in the novels.

By the way, the current Corrosive Knights novel, #7, is clocking in at 103,000 words and humming along nicely, though there’s still plenty left to do before I get to the next draft.

Before I did the above image, I decided to create what I hoped would be a “rough” cover for Book #7.  Incredibly, things came together nice and very quickly.  So nice, in fact, that I may well use this supposed “rough” cover for the real thing when the book is done.

The beauty of having it done so early on is that it gives me time to put it away and not think about it.  When it gets closer to the time to start putting the novel together for release, I’ll hopefully see the artwork “fresh” and determine if indeed it is worth using as my cover.

When the day nears I’ll show it off.  Even if I wind up not using it, I’ll certainly show it off! 😉

Corrosive Knights, a 6/20/17 update

It occurs to me its been a while since I’ve offered an update on book #7, the concluding chapter, of the Corrosive Knights series.

Basically, I’m in what I call the third draft of the book though, truth be told, this is probably the first “complete” first draft.

OK, I know that sounds confusing but here goes: The first draft of the book generally told the story I wanted to tell but with some very big gaps which were meant to be filled up in the future.  That draft wound up being a puny 50,000 or so words and I knew even then considering all the bases that were to be covered that this book would probably be my longest Corrosive Knights novel.

To date, my longest Corrosive Knights novel runs slightly north of 110,000 words so there was a lot to be done still.

However, I needed to print out what I had to that point, read through it, then get a clearer idea of what needed to be done next.  I did this and for the second draft of the book had approximately 65,000 words written up.

Once again, when I got to the end of that draft I knew there was still a hell of a lot to add into the book but, again, felt the need to print what I had, read through it, and then hit it again.

So, as I said above, I’m on the third draft of the book and roughly half-way to the end.  I now have approximately 95,000 words written and know there will be plenty more to come.  I’ve got the first half to three quarters of the book pretty well written out though there will be some bits and pieces that need to be trimmed.

This is a natural process.

I wish I could sit down and in one go write up a book start to finish but that simply isn’t the way I work.  Things need to be clarified and refined and sometimes a thunderbolt will hit me and I realize “don’t do this, do that” and I have to go back and re-work sections of the book.

Again, this is a natural process.

I’m keeping my fingers crossed that I can finish this book by the end of this year but, this far out, that’s a hard thing to promise.  Regardless, once this draft of the book is done, I’m reasonably sure I’ll have just about everything I wanted to put in the book there…and then some.

Hopefully we’ll soon move to the next stage of writing, where I’m more focused on refining what I have and don’t need to add any new material.

On Writing… and a few more thoughts on Roger Moore

While looking around the internet following reading the news of Mr. Moore’s passing, I found the following article by Maxwell Strachan and presented on Huffington Post:

Roger Moore Came to hate the way society glorifies men with guns

The article is pretty much self-descriptive, though it seems Mr. Moore had a lifelong animus regarding guns that first developed when he was a very young man.

There will certainly be those who point out Mr. Moore was a hypocrite.  After all, the most famous character he portrayed, James Bond, often was presented like this…

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Or…

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…or…

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I believe you get the point, no?

Among many other things, James Bond is known for the weapon he carries, a Walther PPK.  Along with romancing beautiful women, high wire escapes, a Martini “shaken and not stirred”, and sophisticated gadgets, the Walther PPK is one of James Bond’s trademarks, the gun the fictional secret agent carries.

I find it fascinating that Mr. Moore, while certainly not slamming the James Bond role that made him a world-wide superstar, nonetheless was quoted as stating:

I regret that sadly heroes in general are depicted with guns in their hands.

Now, as the headline above indicates, this is about “writing”, so how does this relate to my writing?

Because I had something of a same experience with regard to the first novel in my Corrosive Knights series, Mechanic.

When I first envisioned the story, we were just coming off a decade of some very macho -and heavily armed- heroes.  You had Rambo.  You had The Terminator.  You had all the other action roles played by Sylvester Stallone and Arnold Schwarzenneger.

These were next level action heroes who, it appeared, were influenced by Clint Eastwood’s action heroes of the 1970’s, particularly the Magnum brandishing Dirty Harry Callahan.

But as these things go, the spectacle has to be bigger and bigger and therefore the action/violence in many of the films released in the 1980’s and into the 1990’s were bigger and bigger as well…to the point where they made the original Dirty Harry film look positively quaint.

Into that time I first came up with what eventually would become my Mechanic story and the hero of the piece, the tough as nails Nox.

When I first envisioned her, it was through the veil of those heroes and their big guns.

But a curious thing happened on the way to writing the novel itself.

Yes, Nox carries a gun on the cover of Mechanic.  She also carries a handgun on the cover of the fourth book in the series, Nox.  But the character uses a gun very little in either novel.

In fact, the conclusion of Mechanic (MILD SPOILERS!) has Nox taking down those who she’s fighting against without “blowing them away” via heavy gunplay (to be fair, she does shoot one person down with a single shot).

This was done very much on purpose.

The fact is that, like Mr. Moore, when I got down to the business of writing Mechanic I’d developed something of a distaste for the idea of heroes wielding massive arsenals of weapons and engaging in equally massive shootouts.

Though there remain some shootouts here and there, after writing as many books as I have it occurred to me that I’d rejected using this type of resolution.

First, because its been done so many times before and second because I’m just not that into guns and it seemed silly to go there when I can try to be a little more clever with how villains get their just rewards.

I’m not saying that those who love guns and/or are writers/filmmakers/what-have-you who love to do elaborate shoot-outs are somehow creating works I feel are “inferior”, only that my particular creative writing path has taken me elsewhere.

I suppose the bottom line is this: If you’re a writer, write what you feel works for you.  I’ve made many action/adventure novels and the temptation to have elaborate shootouts became, to me anyway, something I didn’t want to dwell on.

I feel the end result was something better, certainly in Mechanic and hopefully in other works as well.

On Writing: What to write and your first work…

It seems an obvious thing, but if you’re interested in writing something, what do you write?

The obvious answer should be similar to everything else regarding you as a person: Write what you like.

If you’re into science fiction, write science fiction.  If you’re into mystery, write mysteries.  Ditto with romances, biographies, young adult, children, or how-to tomes.

Having said that, I suspect there are those who pursue genres or book types which are popular, as well.  I’m hopeful they’re a minority, but who knows.

So you want to be a writer of, say, mysteries, and you wonder what you need to do to come up with your story.

The first step in the process, should you have reached the point where you want to write mystery novels, is to read plenty of mystery novels.  You see what works and, sometimes even more importantly, what does not work in other mystery novels/stories.

You analyze what excites you about them, what, for lack of a better term, “tickles your fancy”.

The next step is to start writing.  And you write and write and write and, eventually –hopefully!– you’ve written that first novel.

Then what?

There is a story, very likely apocryphal, that upon writing his first novel Ernest Hemingway threw it in the trash and got to work on his next book.

The fact of the matter is that whatever you write first, whatever it may be, is likely not going to be all that great.

Understand, there certainly is a possibility the novel or story you write is a good one.

But let’s be real here: Just because you decide to go to the track one day and run a lap or two, it doesn’t mean you’re suddenly the heavy favorite to win the 500 meter race in the next Olympics.

So write that first novel as best as you can.  Pour your heart into it and revise it and polish it and try to make it the very best thing you can.

Then, you have to find the moment to abandon it.

I’m not saying you should throw it away and use the experience gained to write your second novel.  What I’m saying is that as important as starting a novel is, it is almost just as important to find the time to finish your work on it.

I know what I talk of!

Haze, wasn’t the first story I wrote but it was my first attempt at an honest to goodness novel.

Writing the book proved a brutal but ultimately very rewarding experience.

Of all the books I’ve written since, one of the biggest lessons learned from writing Haze is that you need to focus on what is important in the story and not get too consumed with page or word counts.

In the book’s early incarnations, there was an awful lot of stuff going on in the book’s first act, stuff that over time I realized didn’t add much to the story and, worse, kept readers from getting to the good stuff.

The writing of this novel turned from my finding how to create a story to my learning what was important in telling that story versus what was extraneous.

It took me years to figure this out.

In between, I left the book for a while and devoted time to writing other stories and plotting other novels.  I worked and worked while Haze sat in a drawer and on my hard drive.  Now and again I would return to it, having gained more experience over time, and revise it.

I can’t say how many times I’ve revised that book, but I suspect it was far more than my usual 10-12 revisions of a novel.

And that’s another thing that experience teaches you.  I’ve come to realize that my first 1-3rd draft of a novel is usually where I’m putting ideas down, sometimes out of order or presented in a word salad.  If I have a notion for a scene and I’m not certain about where it will go in the book, I may just write a description and highlight it and go about writing whatever else needs to be written.

In time, I have that first “full” draft of the book and from that point on the polishing starts.  I go over the novel to make sure I’ve accounted for every action, that I’ve explained why things occur and how.  I make sure everything is clear.

The last three or four drafts of my latest novel are inevitably devoted to grammar and syntax.  I make sure everything is spelled right and that there be as few typos as possible.

And once I’m done, it’s off to the next book.

I’ve said it before and I’ll repeat it again: Writing is not an easy thing to do.  It requires considerable work and, as should be obvious by what I wrote above, considerable patience and effort.

But if I can do it, anyone can! 😉

On Writing: Success, Part Deux

Yesterday I wrote about the ingredients needed to make a novel a blockbuster success.

Of course, the various ingredients are as follows:

1. Who the hell knows?

2. There is no #2

Having said that, there are things one can do to ensure they at least have the chance of succeeding in the writing business.  But be aware, the dreams of being independently wealthy off your writings must be met with the cold hard reality of the number of books you’re going to be competing against.

According to Bowker, there are a little over 1 million books released each year.  Want to get even more depressed?  Steven Piersanti, president of Berrett-Koehler Publishers, offers the following depressing…

10 Awful Truths About Book Publishing

I won’t go over everything Mr. Piersanti writes, but suffice it to say there are two very big truths regarding books today: 1) The market is oversaturated and 2) Because of this your novel will face very long odds getting any –any– recognition.

So what’s a poor book writer to do?

Keep working… at least as long as it is economically feasible.  Look, I’m like most writers out there.  My dream was/is to be successful at what I do and, hopefully, be able to live off my work.  In the years I’ve been doing this I’ve managed to sell books and have had positive reactions to them but, like everyone else, I’m competing with a tremendously large market.  I happen to have enough financial security -and whatever free time I can carve out of the day- to work on my novels.

However, if you’re facing financial difficulties, you absolutely need to take care of that first and foremost.  If it means putting aside your writing dreams, you have to do this.  Find the free time to follow those dreams after you work and after you get money to pay rent and groceries.

In other words, set your priorities straight.  If things change and you’re able to live off your writings, then you can focus on them full time.

Now here comes a bit of very hard news:  If and when you get your novel done and you manage to get it released, either through a “professional” imprint or independently, DO NOT expect the world to beat down your door and proclaim you the next Stephen King.  In fact, you should expect the exact opposite, that the world will by and large ignore your baby.

Don’t be angered by this reaction!

Again, you’ve just released one novel of over a million released in a year.  What you should do is figure out a strategy to advertise the book, do this, and then get to work on your next novel.  Then your next, then your next.

I suspect new readers feel far more comfortable investing in an author with many works -and hopefully some positive reviews of said book(s)- under their belt versus someone who releases a single book.

Again, don’t be discouraged but approach the writing business realistically and soberly.

You may be that one in a million writer who shatters that very high ceiling and your book becomes a sensation.  This is possible and it has happened to others.

But please, don’t count on it.

Writing is hard work and success, like in so many other fields, is not guaranteed.