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Corrosive Knights Book #7, a 1/11/17 Update

Yesterday George R. R. Martin announced, via his blog, that the latest book in his HUGELY popular Game of Thrones series might well be released this year.

Some fans were very quick to note Mr. Martin’s said similar things before and, while I can certainly understand the frustration of these readers who no doubt are very eager to get to the books before the HBO series finishes off (which it will do in the new season, beating Mr. Martin’s final novel in the process and potentially spoiling material he may have been building towards), I have quite a bit of sympathy -perhaps even more- for Mr. Martin.

For you see, though my novels aren’t nearly as popular (or well known) as Mr. Martin’s, I’ve “been there” with books in the process of being written which I’ve thought would be ready at a certain time and, alas, they simply were not.  In fact, my most recent Corrosive Knights book, Foundry of the Gods (#6 in the series) I originally thought I could finish by February of 2016 but didn’t get it done and released until November, nine full months later.

Trust me when I say I would have loved to finish the book in February and be nearly a full year into Book #7 of the series rather than a little under two months.  Sadly, sometimes it takes longer than you’d like to finish something and, while my novels don’t feature the virtual army of characters present in Mr. Martin’s series, the story I’m laying out in Corrosive Knights is intricate and requires many pieces to fit together.

Rushing Foundry of the Gods’ release would have done no one any good, neither me -I would have been very disappointed with the book- nor those who have read it, who no doubt would have been just as disappointed reading what amounted to a “rush job”.

So for those impatient for Mr. Martin’s latest Game of Thrones novel, I urge patience.  Hopefully the book(s), when they are eventually released, will prove worth the extra wait.

Having said that and as should be obvious by the header above, I’m presenting an update on Book #7 of the Corrosive Knights series.  As should also be obvious, this book follows Foundry of the Gods and, more importantly, is the conclusion to the Corrosive Knights series.

Perhaps it is because the book finally reveals/focuses on events I’ve had swirling in my mind for many, many years that the writing of this novel has progressed quite well.  Even though I had little chance to write for most of the end of December (vacation and daughters come home and enjoyable distractions abound!), as of today I’m roughly 33,000 words into this book.  As my novels tend to run around 100,000 words, it means I’m in/around 1/3 of the way through this story, an incredibly quick pace compared to other works.

Even more thrilling is the fact that yesterday I laid out the outline for the material that fills the remaining 2/3rds of the novel, which means that for much of that material I simply have to write it out and not sweat the plot details.

That’s not to say, however, that the book is “just about” finished.

There are still story gaps to be dealt with, specifically in the middle section of the book.  This, by the way, is very typical of the way I work.  While some writers have trouble finishing a novel (a complaint I’ve heard often of the books of Stephen King) or beginning one, I seem to have the least amount of difficulties coming up with my novel’s start and finish.  It is the middle sections, the glue that joins my story’s beginning and end, that tends to cause me the most “hard” work.

Still, there’s reason for optimism and while I cannot guarantee the book will be finished before year’s end, I can absolutely guarantee that if it isn’t done by the later part of 2017 it will be finished and released by early next year.

Let’s see how things go.

Selfish thoughts and 2016…updated…

2016 started with so much promise.

If I recall correctly, I was looking forward to not just one, not just two, but three albums.  Considering how little I buy new music, this was truly a wealth of goods.

Two of the albums, Anthrax’s For All Kings and Megadeth’s Dystopia, were thrash metal albums released by my two favorite heavy metal bands.  The third album I was looking forward to was the latest and, it would turn out, last David Bowie album, Blackstar.

With the sudden and very shocking announcement of Mr. Bowie’s death a mere couple of days after the release of that album, what was a cause of celebration, hearing another of his works, quickly soured.  The album was damn great, mind you, but it was hard to listen to it with the gut punch of it being tied to his death.

As for Anthrax and Megadeth’s albums, I liked them but…I dunno.  They were perfectly fine works but didn’t have the same something or another their other, better albums had.

But things weren’t all bad.  I knew in 2016 I’d finally release my new novel, Foundry of the Gods.  I put in so much work on it in 2015 and by the time 2016 rolled around figured the book could be done by February.

Boy, was I wrong.

The book took far longer to finish up, ultimately taking me through November and its release just as we had what, to my mind, was one of the more depressing bits of news ever: The election of Donald Trump to President of the United States.

Yesterday word came that Carrie Fisher had died after suffering a heart attack on board a plane traveling to L.A.  The news wasn’t shocking considering what was described of the heart attack and her apparently being out and unresponsive but of course, it was shocking.

Between Mr. Bowie’s death and Ms. Fisher’s passing we’ve had a year full of deaths, from Muhammad Ali to Gene Wilder to Don Hendley to Abe Vigota to…it seems to go on and on and on and as I write this it is December 28th and there are still 3 more days left to this year and one wonders if we’re in for any more nasty surprises.

(UPDATE:  So now comes word Debbie Reynolds, Carrie Fisher’s mother and a remarkable actress in her own right, passed away one freaking day after her daughter.  This incredibly cruel year just can’t end soon enough.)

I said above this was about “selfish thoughts” and I’ll get to that now: Going into the year, I was filled with the optimism I noted above.  A new book just about ready.  Three albums I was looking forward to buying and listening to.

And then things went so very bad.

Despite the added length of time it took to finish up Foundry of the Gods, I (pardon my language) fucking love the damn book and consider it one of the best I’ve written to date.

Yet as much as I love the book and as much as I cherish my own personal accomplishment and the fact that for the first time I’m seeing so many people pick up my latest work as it is released (thank you all very much for that), the novel will be forever linked to what could well be one of the shittier years, at least in terms of downbeat news, I’ve ever witnessed.

2017 is right around the corner and a part of me hopes things will get better yet another part of me recognizes a Trump Presidency -and all the lunacy I fear will come from it- lies just around the corner.

I work on, hoping for better times yet worried 2017 might be just as turbulent and depressing as 2016.

For my very own selfish reasons, if I do manage to finish my new book before the end of 2017, I hope its release doesn’t tie it, at least in my mind, with any more depressing news.

All stories are the same…

Over on The Atlantic, John Yorke offers his analysis of stories in general and thematic similarities they all share:

All Stories Are The Same

Given the article’s title, you can be forgiven for thinking “why bother” with this article when its conclusion is right there.

If you’re into telling stories, however, I strongly encourage you to check the article out.  It’s a beautifully reasoned work that explores the elements that make up a story.  Yes, all stories share a very similar thematic skeleton, but its in the telling of the tale, and the tale you present, where the differences come in and its why certain stories shine while others may not.

What I find most fascinating, and at the very real risk of stepping on the article, is the very last sentence Mr. Yorke offers in the article.  I’ll reprint it below but, again, I encourage anyone who is interested in the mechanics of storytelling to give the full article a look.

Anyway, the line is:

In stories throughout the ages there is one motif that continually recurs—the journey into the woods to find the dark but life-giving secret within.

As a writer myself, I can’t tell you how elegant and illustrative that single sentence is when related to creative writing.  All stories, mine very much included, feature a “journey into the woods” and finding that “dark but life-giving secret” within.

Beautiful sentence.  Beautiful encapsulation.

Bright, shiny, new…

Those who haven’t yet checked it out should give my home website, ertorre.com, a look-see as I’ve revamped the thing and am pretty happy with the end results.

As with all things, I suspect I’ll do some fix-ups here and there but overall I’m pleased with the results.

For those who are curious about the Corrosive Knights series of books I’m writing, I’ve included an essay/FAQ section regarding the series which you can find here.

Onwards!

Corrosive Knights, a 11/18/16 Update – First Update for Book #7

So its been a few days since I’ve a) finished and released FOUNDRY OF THE GODS, the sixth book in the CORROSIVE KNIGHTS series and b) since I got my website re-made and the blog problems settled.

I could sit back, take it easy for the rest of the year and catch up on some of the video games I’ve bought but haven’t had time to play (Battlefield 1 and Fallout 4 being the two predominant ones) or, likewise, catch up on movies I’ve rented/bought but have also let slide (I just picked up the digital version of the extended cut of Suicide Squad and want to see if that improves upon that very flawed film in any way and also have Captain America: Civil War waiting for me along with at least a dozen other films I’m curious to check out), or, likewise redux, catch up on some books I’ve picked up and have waiting for me in my Kindle…

But who am I kidding?

Finishing FOUNDRY OF THE GODS was an incredible rush, especially after having worked on it for just a little over two years, and now that its done I’m juiced to get to the next novel in the series, #7, which will be the conclusion to the main CORROSIVE KNIGHTS storyline.

Mark this date on the calendar, I certainly will: Today is the day I formally start that book.  I’ve already done quite a bit of work on it, from using the index card app to build a rough plot outline to actually writing a few chapters of the book when I was free enough to do so.

Will this book take me two years to write as well?  I suspect it might not, only because I already have so much material squirreled away and ready.  With FOUNDRY, I started almost completely from scratch with a start and ending and little else.  With Book #7, I also have a start and end planned out but also some good stuff for the middle sections.

When all is said and done, I also suspect this book will be one of the longest ones I write, longer perhaps than THE LAST FLIGHT OF THE ARGUS, which is currently my longest book, wordcount-wise.

But enough gabbing.

Time to write!

Because you had to know, part something or another…

From electricliterature.com and written by Dani Spencer…

Literature’s Most Notorious Award is Back

What is literature’s most notorious award?  Why, the “Bad Sex in Fiction” award, of course!

The 2016 nominees are listed in the article above and I can’t help but paste one of the examples of bad sex in fiction from the article below.  It’s a howler, for sure, courtesy of Jonathan Safran Foer:

“He jerked off with the determination of someone within sight of Everest’s summit, having lost all his friends and Sherpas, having run out of supplemental oxygen, but preferring death to failure.”

O……kay?!

I’ll be curious to read some of the other nominees.

For intellectual reasons, of course.

Still here!

Sometimes it feels like the universe is conspiring against you.

In a big way.

A little over two years ago I started my latest CORROSIVE KNIGHTS novel, FOUNDRY OF THE GODS, and all was well.  By well I mean: It took a great deal of patience and a hell of a lot of work to get the book done.

And when I was done, I was happy, as I always am when such a large amount of work is finished.

So who would believe that:

  1. I release the damn book the day before the elections and then find myself absolutely crushed by what happened within.
  2. That I would innocently begin the process of updating my webpage and spend the next week in computing hell trying to get everything to work as it should?

Ok, I brought #2 on myself but, seriously, who would have thought this country would be dumb enough to elect someone like Donald Trump to the presidency?  Didn’t anyone learn their lesson with George W. Bush?

Ah well, the choice is made and, as I said before, let’s hope the office is better than the man.  I strongly suspect those who voted for Mr. Trump will take a good deal of broken promises and general presidential insanity to prove to them they made the wrong choice.

Regardless, things around here look like they’ve finally settled.  I’ve got the blog up and running and the website looks nice.  I’ll still do some work on it but the new system is so much easier to use.

For those who bought FOUNDRY OF THE GODS, hope you enjoyed it.

Corrosive Knights – Foundry of the Gods

As of today, 11/8/16, I have the paperback version of Foundry of the Gods “in review” and should become available for purchase by later today or early tomorrow.

The Foundry of the Gods ebook is now listed with the other five books of the series under the Corrosive Knights Amazon link:

Corrosive Knights (6 Book Series)

Even more exciting, as of today I’ve experienced something I haven’t experienced before:  I have book sales simultaneously listed for the United States, UK, France, Canada, and Australia!

I’ve had sales for my books throughout the world but this is the first time I’ve seen sales appear simultaneously in five different countries and, for that, I want to thank those out there in these countries for giving my works a try.  I sincerely hope you enjoy what I’ve made!

Next step: Update my main webpage.  Should do that at least every time I write a new book, no? 😉

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Corrosive Knights, a 11/7/06 Update – Foundry of the Gods

Yesterday, 11/6/16, I uploaded my latest Corrosive Knights novel, Foundry of the Gods, to Amazon and their ebook/Kindle services.  At sometime around midnight, the book went “live” and available for everyone to purchase.  You can do so at this link:

Foundry of the Gods

foundry-cover

What was so wonderful to discover at a little after midnight and what must have been minutes after the book was made available was that some people already purchased the book!

To them I must say: My deepest, most heartfelt thanks to you.  This is the first time a book of mine has gone live and already found an audience willing to buy it.  This certainly encourages me to continue my work.

For those others who have given my books a try or will experience them for the first time, I also offer my deepest thanks.

Spending one’s hard earned money on what amounts to an author’s flight of fancy is something I take incredibly seriously.  This is the reason it takes me as much time as it does to release my works.  I want to make sure they’re worth spending your money on.

As for today, I’ll finish up the work for the paperback version of this novel and that too will be available very soon for purchase.

In the meantime, I hope those who have the book -or will soon get it- like what I’ve written.  If you do, please take a moment to offer a review.  There’s nothing that makes me happier than seeing you were happy with what I wrote.

In the meantime, have a very pleasant day.  For those living in the United States, hang on.  The election is tomorrow and by Wednesday the insanity levels should finally ease…

…one hopes! 😉

Corrosive Knights, a 11/4/16 update

The day has finally come.

As of yesterday, I completed the latest draft (#12) of book #6 of the Corrosive Knights series.  I took five days to re-read the book and add notes/corrections in pen.  It took only four days to take those corrections/notes and put them into the computer.  When I was done with that, I felt there were still three chapters that required one more read-through, “just in case”.  One of the chapters was part of the original three I worked on in draft #11, the other two just featured more corrections this time around and I felt I should go over it one more time to make sure all was well.

I did all that on Thursday, finishing the entire novel by shortly before noon.

Since then, I’ve been preparing the novel for formal release.  I’m working on both the “print” version as well as the e-book/Kindle version along with such necessities as creating ISBN numbers and submitting the work to the Copyright Office.

As those who have read my entries here know, I’ve kept the title of the book secret.  I did this mostly because of the later point listed above.  I don’t feel comfortable releasing specifics such as book titles until I’ve done the copyrights and, now that they’re done, here you have it:

foundry-cover

As you can see, the title of Book #6 of the Corrosive Knights series is Foundry of the Gods.

I might still tweak the cover a little bit but regardless, by sometime next week the e-book will be available for purchase and, once I review the print/hard copies, they too will be available.  Give that another week.

In the meantime, I’ll get all the other busywork done and give you a head’s up when the latest novel is indeed available for purchase.

It’s been a long, long road to get here but I couldn’t be happier.  Foundry of the Gods, for those who have read this series to this point, should knock your socks off! 😉